Friday, February 6, 2015

a lost dime

it sheds a flickering light: weak
and without ambition.
.
Twenty-one years ago, in a capital
city of Newton,
a spell was broken.
and two lives were woven together
on daily basis.
.
a copper smith overlooks its worth,
and places it in a glass Jar.
.
Another dime is added
in Tennessee Quail Market,
not much of differences.
.
I have made a decision,
Let the dime's stay as tokens of DiFiance.

20 comments:

Angenette Karen Gregory Olivara Beredjick said...

wonderful myth.

Larry Hasty Wendy Stanley Wojcicki said...

this speaks to me.

Roessel Morton Celeste Nicholas Thornton said...

incredible.

eleanor and joseph said...

lovely verse.

Abigail Michael Boyle Blount Fallin said...

a fairytale in a sad mode, well done.

Skylar Whetstone Hayley Bollag Romney said...

powerful.

Malia Craig Tagg Lawrence Page said...

handsome.

Roxanne Burns George Arrington-Hans said...

interesting.

Kora-Leah Meet Faust Wilson said...

weird story with some interesting imagery.
fun verse.

Anonymous said...

interesting.

Jeanne Elena Owen-Mihaltses Henneberry said...

it is hard to write a story,
but it is good to have one down.

Mary Bruce Leopold Holm Reed said...

i believe that it is a worthy piece with a lovely metaphor.

marit said...

I really like the personality in this.

Linda Eugenia Denise Brin Korbetis said...

very individual story.

Alex Dissing said...

I would love to read more of this story. Keep building, keep writing.

Stephan Peter Carl Victor Hudson said...

wise.

Cindy Gary Murray Tomblin Bullock said...

nice.

Anne Emerson Sharp Block Bloomberg said...

a creative piece.

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Shapirol said...

Happy Day.

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Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Shapirol said...

lovely story.