Friday, February 17, 2012

Whiz and Bang

you drum away on
the mountains and braes of
bonnies Ireland, where
on the edge of your mind,
the iris stirs
like a girl all novel
with long blond hair,
wind-blown,
shaking her head
to waft her scent
at your naughty naughty thoughts,
and you hammer
the valleys and braes automatically
with all your might.

5 comments:

G-Man said...

Iris...
You actually had 56 words, but The G-Man is very forgiving, and welcomes you to The Friday Funfest!
If you play again,(and please do) post a link to my blog at the bottom of your contribution.
It's creative, it's challenging, and it's FUN!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Brian Miller said...

the iris stirs like a girl all novel...great lines that...i think you did quite well in 55...smiles.

Robin Clinton said...

you have exactly 55 words,
well done 55 story.

Morton Monica Evans said...

great 55.

Jingle said...

keep it up.