lovely shape and thoughts.
What a shape! I love it!
Interesting, yes, have to love the shape of it!_!
The golden fire rising high and peering over the horizons! Love the creativity!
Overly awesome, I wish I could write, and create and artistic picture as well. Very clever. Good job.
Yes, yes and yes. Perfectly sculpted!
Awesome!!!You sculpted a poem.Just loved the ending.
This works. It is nicely shaped, as others have commented, and I like the sequence of one image being somehow linked to, or nested in the one after it, kind of like Russian dolls.And the end is very powerful, the image of the corridor wanting to be the sea, seeming to express a desire too big to be contained within present circumstances.Have a great Rally!You can find my entry at:http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/fall-into-anticipation/
Beautiful shape and great thoughts.Short Poems
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